second speech

i did better with my second speech, though i needed more information. i added a works cited page for some of the things i looked up. i did look around a lot, and i had a lot of pictures in this one, which is one of the good aspects of the speech. it gave good information about the topic. there were also a lot of other good things about it, but there were some bad things. like my hook again, it really wasn't there. then the differences wernt very good, neither was the conclusion. but over all, it was a good speech.

speech

with my power point speech, i noticed that i didn't really do a very good job, but i did notice a lot of things i did do well on. i kept focused most of the time, my voice was load, and i was looking around instead of looking in one spot. my slides could use some work on the hook at the beginning, and my conclusion is pretty good. even for a speech about how star wars is better than star trek, it is good. my posture was also good while i was giving my speech.

blarg

With my speech, I noticed I need to speak up more, and I need a hook for the beginning of my speech.  I also need to work on my slides, and my words cited.