second speech

i did better with my second speech, though i needed more information. i added a works cited page for some of the things i looked up. i did look around a lot, and i had a lot of pictures in this one, which is one of the good aspects of the speech. it gave good information about the topic. there were also a lot of other good things about it, but there were some bad things. like my hook again, it really wasn't there. then the differences wernt very good, neither was the conclusion. but over all, it was a good speech.